In fact those whothought that the images higher up the attractiveness scale were real directlycorresponded with those who showed other makers for having higher self-esteem.

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were realdirectly corresponded with 是謂語

我想問一下，be動詞＋形容詞，又和be correspondedwith短語搭配，如此可以嗎？如何感覺怪怪的。

你混淆了主句和從句。 who thoughtthat the images higher up the attractiveness scale were real這是定語從句，修飾主句主語those，而directlycorresponded with是主句的謂語。你把從句的謂語和主句的謂語混淆在一塊了。犯這個錯誤是什么原因你沒句子的整體觀，沒考慮句子的主干結構是什么。